surf_name_unknown

This is my first map, so any feedback would be very helpful.

This is not a finished map either so please take that into consideration. Also suggestions for a name would help

Link: http://www.mediafire.com/download/c2...nown_beta1.bsp

Video: https://youtu.be/Gwv9DwkMh6c

EDIT: NEW VIDEO https://youtu.be/V50BVsmqZcg

DL Link coming soon

EDIT2: well i put a song instead of a video, sh*t

Edit3: http://www.mediafire.com/download/g6...nown_beta2.bsp Heres the new DL link, this is not the last version, im thinking of adding a second bonus

Edit4: After just not posting updates or anything, i have finally gotten to the point where i think the map is "finished". There might still be some issues with it, but surfwise its done. In the file there are 2 versions of the map. The first version of the map has 2 seperate bonuses, access to the second bonus requires you to land on top of the end box in the first bonus. The second version combines both bonuses and creates a difficult bonus that is harder than it should be. https://www.mediafire.com/?pupc7pl8slwslpt There will probably not be any more updates to this.

Edit5: This should be the final version, http://www.mediafire.com/download/wc...nown_final.bsp It is version 2 from my previous edit, so 1 bonus

Edit 6: Nothing has changed, just finally got around to renaming the file, official name is surf_woodwork! (Thanks Kiiru!)
DL: http://www.mediafire.com/download/qc...f_woodwork.bsp

Edit 7: Forgot to pack textures, DL from edit 6 now works and you can actually see now

It looks like it'd be okay to surf, it just looks... boring.

Surf looks alright, but it could really need some detailing - windows, for example, or just anything that makes it less generic.

Thanks for the responses! I have gone and added some more detail here and there http://imgur.com/a/ckoij

cool textures

Definitely needs some detail, perhaps better lighting in some areas aswell. Adding a spin somewhere would be sweet too!

And maybe a prettier skybox. Check komaokc on gamebanana.

I have done a ton of changes to the map (added a bonus too). I'll upload a video and a download link tomorrow (its 1:45am right now)

It looks cool, it's great for your first map too. :D

New Video! https://youtu.be/V50BVsmqZcg