surf_name_unknown

This is my first map, so any feedback would be very helpful.

This is not a finished map either so please take that into consideration. Also suggestions for a name would help

Link: http://www.mediafire.com/download/c2...nown_beta1.bsp

Video: https://youtu.be/Gwv9DwkMh6c

EDIT: NEW VIDEO https://youtu.be/V50BVsmqZcg

DL Link coming soon

EDIT2: well i put a song instead of a video, sh*t

Edit3: http://www.mediafire.com/download/g6...nown_beta2.bsp Heres the new DL link, this is not the last version, im thinking of adding a second bonus

Edit4: After just not posting updates or anything, i have finally gotten to the point where i think the map is "finished". There might still be some issues with it, but surfwise its done. In the file there are 2 versions of the map. The first version of the map has 2 seperate bonuses, access to the second bonus requires you to land on top of the end box in the first bonus. The second version combines both bonuses and creates a difficult bonus that is harder than it should be. https://www.mediafire.com/?pupc7pl8slwslpt There will probably not be any more updates to this.

Edit5: This should be the final version, http://www.mediafire.com/download/wc...nown_final.bsp It is version 2 from my previous edit, so 1 bonus

Edit 6: Nothing has changed, just finally got around to renaming the file, official name is surf_woodwork! (Thanks Kiiru!)
DL: http://www.mediafire.com/download/qc...f_woodwork.bsp

Edit 7: Forgot to pack textures, DL from edit 6 now works and you can actually see now

It looks like it'd be okay to surf, it just looks... boring.

Surf looks alright, but it could really need some detailing - windows, for example, or just anything that makes it less generic.

Thanks for the responses! I have gone and added some more detail here and there http://imgur.com/a/ckoij

cool textures

Definitely needs some detail, perhaps better lighting in some areas aswell. Adding a spin somewhere would be sweet too!

And maybe a prettier skybox. Check komaokc on gamebanana.

I have done a ton of changes to the map (added a bonus too). I'll upload a video and a download link tomorrow (its 1:45am right now)

It looks cool, it's great for your first map too. :D

New Video! https://youtu.be/V50BVsmqZcg

good song. :D

Definitely a huge improvement visually, looks really good.

Yup definitly looks better now, if you could provide a download link for your map lastest version i'd appreciate that really much.

Map looks cool , def a map i want to try

That's weird, the first time I clicked on the new youtube link it took me some music video. The second time it worked though. Either way, it's definitely improved, keep it up :D

yeah i messed up, was sending a song to someone, but i forgot to copy the video link

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Yup definitly looks better now, if you could provide a download link for your map lastest version i'd appreciate that really much.

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Thanks! Also, heres the link http://www.mediafire.com/download/g6...nown_beta2.bsp

Feedback on your map (beta2) .

-Map : allright, i tried the map and it was a lot of fun (much better than some of maps in the ksf map pool), design was pretty, ramps were good imo i didnt hit a single glitch in a few full run of that map.

-Bonus: bonus is also fun but maybe a little bit too easy, end of bonus could be on the ground of the little structure only, or even on top on that little structure (i landed on top of it) .

well anyway as i already said map and bonus were pretty fun, so you did a good job on your first map.
( i saw you think on adding another bonus,i say yes the more bonus the more fun )

New version, possibly final https://www.mediafire.com/?pupc7pl8slwslpt read main post first

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Originally Posted by SlimSandvich

New version, possibly final https://www.mediafire.com/?pupc7pl8slwslpt read main post first

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Have video of it? would like to watch the improvements

1. You can hit the invisible spawn box on s2 causing you to jump lower
2. You can hit the end teleports for all stages by hitting the side

Fix those and I think you're good!

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Originally Posted by Silverthing

1. You can hit the invisible spawn box on s2 causing you to jump lower
2. You can hit the end teleports for all stages by hitting the side

Fix those and I think you're good!

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Thanks for the response Sliver. I went ahead and fixed those with this final version http://www.mediafire.com/download/wc...nown_final.bsp

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Originally Posted by Sundayy

Have video of it? would like to watch the improvements

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The only real improvement is that the bonus has been changed quite a bit https://youtu.be/XaAQa1yUq-c

New bonus looks pretty good, hope map gets added soon.

Yes new bonus looks cool! , old one was a bit joke , good job! :excited:

Bonus and map both look much better than they did before, great job!

surf_woodwork, surf_woobrik, surf_brikoo

surf_stiff

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Originally Posted by Kiiru

surf_woodwork, surf_woobrik, surf_brikoo

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woodwork is a pretty good name, might use that one. Thanks for the suggestions Kiiru

you'll have to get permission from Mr. Cow first

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Originally Posted by Juxtapo

you'll have to get permission from Mr. Cow first

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Because of the stonework maps?

i don't think that name "woodwork" as well as "stiff"

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Originally Posted by Juxtapo

you'll have to get permission from Mr. Cow first

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l0l

Bump for final edit. Read main post for the single change

The map looks generally surfs and looks excellent now, or from what I've seen in the video. I pretty much had 0 textures and beat the map with the infamous missing texture pink and black dots everywhere. Feels good to surf though. :nervous:

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The map looks generally surfs and looks excellent now, or from what I've seen in the video. I pretty much had 0 textures and beat the map with the infamous missing texture pink and black dots everywhere. Feels good to surf though. :nervous:

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Well, i thought i had the textures packed, but they were not. Sh*t.
New DL: http://www.mediafire.com/download/qc...f_woodwork.bsp

came up with another name, took me the better part of a week though, surf_stiffness

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Originally Posted by skip tracer

came up with another name, took me the better part of a week though, surf_stiffness

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Its already been named, sorry skip. Feel free to call it surf_stiff you want, but thats not the official name

Can you upload a final version to gamebanana?

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Originally Posted by Sacred

Can you upload a final version to gamebanana?

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Yeah, I can. Will upload it soon

Edit: http://gamebanana.com/maps/192170