surf_ez (my first map)

[enjooi]

Hey! Ive recently started learning about hammer, and ive created my first map!
The map is staged, with 4 stages and a bonus. all the needed triggers is in place, also no falldmg, and no wep!
Its a metallic theme, with different light colors on every stage.


http://www.gamebanana.com/css/maps/163570

sry for bad quality screens!

Anyway, i would like some feedback!


-enjooi

[enjooi]

made a version 2! can be found on the same link as before. have not updated screens yet!

in version 2:

different lightening
different texture on walls
a 5 stage, which is longer

[evolv]

For your first map its alright I suppose. Advice; more natural colors, less one toned stages, longer more curved ramps, work on lighting, spacing of ramps, flow of surf, ect.